Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Ocean

I am up in the air. Surfers are on the high waves in the ocean. I feel the cool artificial ocean breeze flow across my face. We ar sitting in a row with strangers every where. Up, down, left, right. Our ride is coming to an end. The fireworks crack, Nathan screams. we all float swiftly back down to the ground. We unstrap our seat belts, and grab our shoes from below our seats. As we exit the ride, we get right back in line again for Soarin'.
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6 comments:

  1. The Slay PoetNovember 11, 2009 at 11:37 AM

    This makes me think of Florida, relaxing and vacationing. I really like your use of directions.

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  2. Cara M.November 11, 2009 at 11:39 AM

    The ride that I was describing is in Florida at Disney World but it is actually a duplicate of a ride at Disneyland in California so all the scenes in the ride are from California.

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  3. Hannah G.November 11, 2009 at 11:44 AM

    Hey Cara! when I went to Florida I went on Soarin'. The ride is just like how you discribed it and it's one of my favorite rides there!!!!

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  4. Cara M.November 11, 2009 at 12:17 PM

    At the end when it says my brother screams, ya he actually screams when the fireworks go off just to make us laugh. =)

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  5. KatelynNovember 11, 2009 at 2:39 PM

    That describes Soarin' realy well. That was a awwesome ride!
    -Katelyn

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  6. AlainaNovember 11, 2009 at 2:43 PM

    Wow, that's cool! Makes me want to go on the ride now.

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